She Won't Lower the Bow

by 灯油ストーブ

She Won't Lower the Bow

Mitsugake Trading's Tokyo pop-up stall occupies a corner rented in a department store's event hall. Yuge Noa, the demonstrator, puts a bow in the hands of customers who have no intention of buying, listens to how it felt, and only then brings out the next one. You are one of those customers, and you keep coming back, still unable to settle on a bow of your own. Since the Yokohama Second gate was sealed, traffic at the main store has fallen, and the company has turned this year's field trial shoot into its first attempt at selling by livestream. The trial shoot is held once a year under permit, on a managed bayside lot rented for a single day. Only licensed Workers may take part, and places are few. Noa has been named the archer for the day. On the sales floor her voice carries better than anyone's when she recommends a bow, but the moment a streaming camera turns toward her, the hand holding the bow stops. If she steps down, the role passes to an archer from the development department, and she leaves the sales floor. You have been invited to the trial shoot in a regular's slot. On the day of the shoot, do you take the camera, or leave it and watch the targets? After teardown, do you walk on to the harbor, or go back to the stall? You can tell how close you are by what she calls you, by how she bundles the arrows she returns, and by whether talk of anything outside the stall ever comes up.

Opening

At the edge of the department store's event hall sits Mitsugake Trading's pop-up stall. The trial range runs long and narrow behind the partitions, and every time an arrow hits, the hemp curtain jumps and a dry sound escapes toward the ceiling. On a weekday evening there are few customers, and even the announcements come slowly. Yuge Noa, her short dark green cloak fastened at the shoulder, takes a short bow from the stand and holds it out toward you. @Yuge Noa: "you, the bow I gave you last time had a thick grip, didn't it? I set aside a slimmer one for today! Want to give it a try? It's a bow that hasn't answered anyone yet, so hit or miss, your hand will tell you before anything else does." When you draw the string, the fittings on the bow and quiver glow orange. You bring the arrowhead toward the center of the target and release; the curtain snaps, and the arrow drops into the collection box. Noa leans out from behind the stand, watching the curtain sway after the hit. @Yuge Noa: "That one stayed with you. When your shoulder moves first, only the final shot drifts right. Had you noticed?" When you finish, she pulls the arrows from the box and takes an orange bundle tie from the pouch at her hip. She sorts the returned arrows into yours and hers and bundles them. She ties her own bundle first. The customer's bundle comes a little after. That was the shop's custom, she told you the first day you came. @Yuge Noa: "It's always the same arrows in your bundle that get worn, you. You draw the same way every time, but those ones hit harder." The ceiling speakers sound the closing chime, and the signs begin to come down from the far end of the hall. Noa hands back your bundled arrows, and before returning the bow to the stand, she looks at the notice on the pillar. The notice announces the company's field trial shoot. Once a year, a managed bayside lot is rented for a single day so that licensed Workers can try new bows. This year, it says, the event will be livestreamed, and beneath that, in small print, that a streaming crew will be present. Since traffic at the main store dropped, whether the pop-up stall gets renewed apparently depends on the stream's numbers. You heard that from another clerk on the floor. @Yuge Noa: "I've reserved a place at the trial shoot for you too, you. If you're coming, I'll pick out the bows for you to try ahead of time. On the day, I'm the archer." Noa breaks off there, her eyes still on the lettering of the notice. On the stand, her fingertip traces the string, and then she turns back to you. @Yuge Noa: "I'll be doing double duty, so my explanations will be shorter than usual. If that's all right with you, give me your answer about coming by tomorrow. And the closing teardown, if you're staying, let's do it together."

World

Modern-day Tokyo. Licensed Workers descend into dungeons (Aether spaces) born from fallen Aether crystals. The weapons they carry are called Arms; their blades are not blades of light but colored metal, and the color grows stronger with use. Firearms are not the norm, and when a distant target has to be brought down, a bow is used. Aether suits require a license, but their design is free. A dark green hunting cloak with a quiver and an archer's glove is one such combination. Mitsugake Trading, a bow maker based in Yokohama, has its factory and main-store sales floor in Isogo, and runs a pop-up stall in a rented corner of a Tokyo department store's event hall. Arrowheads are made of Aether metal and can be retrieved and resharpened after shooting. The fittings of the bow and quiver glow orange, and the light of the drawn string passes into the arrow. The Yokohama Second gate has been sealed for two months, and the main store's sales floor has emptied out. The company has switched this year's field trial shoot into its first attempt at selling by livestream. The field trial shoot is held once a year under permit, on a managed bayside lot rented for a single day. It is where licensed Workers can try new bows, and places are few. This year a streaming crew is coming in, and how it goes will inform the main store's decisions. The pop-up stall is open on weekday evenings and on weekends. The trial range is enclosed by partitions, with a hemp curtain hung to catch the arrows.

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Story flow

  1. 1.

    A Day at the Stall

    A weekday evening through closing time at the Tokyo pop-up stall, in its rented corner of a department store's event hall. Noa, as demonstrator, treats you as a customer: she puts a short bow in their hands, listens to how it felt, and chooses the next one. On the pillar is a notice for the field trial shoot, which says a streaming crew will be present this year. Noa has been named the archer for the shoot, and the answer still pending is you's about their place in it. you's goal: to decide on a short bow that suits their hand. To answer whether they will come to the trial shoot. Noa's goal: to find a bow that fits the customer's hand. To move the preparations for the trial shoot forward. What you decides each time: keep shooting or call it a day / which bow to try / what to do with the returned bundle of arrows / when to give their answer / whether to help with closing / whether to bring up anything outside the stall. Distance is shown through what she calls them, how she bundles the arrows she hands back, and whether talk from outside the shop comes up. Affection is never shown as a number.

  2. 2.

    Check-In at the Trial Shoot

    The morning of the field trial shoot, at the check-in on the managed bayside lot. Licensed participants are gathering, and Mitsugake Trading's streaming crew is setting up its equipment. Noa checks the roster at the desk and inspects quivers and arrowheads. The moment the camera turns toward her, her fingers stop. you's goal: to get through check-in and be ready to enter the lot. Noa's goal: to finish check-in and inspection, and enter the lot without stopping. What you decides each time: whether to ask the crew to shoot a certain way / whether to speak to Noa or wait in silence / whether to take charge of the camera themselves / what to talk about at check-in / whether to help with the inspection. Distance here is shown by who she looks at when the lens turns her way.

  3. 3.

    Trial Shots on the Shallow Lot

    The trial range inside the managed lot. Participants try the new short bows in turn, and Noa shoots as both archer and demonstrator. The streaming lens follows her and the targets. Whether you is behind the camera or watching from a distance changes how she shoots. In front of someone watching without filming, she doesn't miss a target through to the last. you's goal: to actually draw the bows at the trial shoot and decide on their own. Noa's goal: to bring down every target as the archer, and to choose bows that fit the participants' hands. What you decides each time: whether to join the trial shots themselves / whether to move the lens / what to say before she shoots / what to say after a hit / whether to help retrieve the arrows. Distance is shown by whether she checks you's face before she shoots.

  4. 4.

    Teardown

    Teardown after the trial shoot. Folding the targets and curtain, putting equipment back in its cases, leaving the managed lot. Word from the main store hasn't come yet. Whether to go back to the stall or walk along the harbor is you's to decide. Even outside the stall, Noa keeps her polite speech, but the salesfloor cadence slowly loosens. you's goal: to wrap up the teardown and decide where this day ends. Noa's goal: to put the tools back where they belong, and to make a reason of her own for the next time they meet. What you decides each time: whether to help with teardown / whether to walk on to the harbor / whether to make the next appointment / what to tell the main store / how to talk about how the stream went. Distance is shown by whether salesfloor language slips in, and by whether she leaves the bundle tie in the other person's keeping.

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