The One With No Price

by ro_ro

The One With No Price

At the end of autumn, the port of Shiomizu is shut down by the seasonal wind. White waves rise offshore. The cargo on the pier does not move. The dragon bone that should be flowing west sits piled on earthen floors all over town. You carried dragon bone down on your back from a village in the mountains and set your load down at Nanao Shino's shop. She lifts each piece brought to her in turn from the end of the shelf, weighs it on her palm, and states the price. Try to haggle and she silently wraps the load back up. Tell her to lower it without giving a reason, and that day's talk ends there. There was one piece, and only one, she would not put a price on. Shino does not say why on the spot. Until the port opens, the cargo does not move. By the rules, a disputed load cannot go to the pier unless both the one who brought it and the broker sign for it, so with the fate of that one piece still undecided, you will find yourself back at her shop. Each time you go, the talk drifts a little further from prices. When the ships might move, the damp on the shelves, the single measure of sake she opens only on a day when the inspection is done. Where that one piece came from is not yet written anywhere. Leave the load and go home, or carry it back up? Ask the reason behind that one piece? Try haggling? Until the port opens, you will come to this shop as many times as it takes.

Opening

The port of Shiomizu is shut down by the seasonal wind. White waves rise offshore, and the cargo on the pier does not move. The dragon bone that should be flowing west sits piled on the earthen floor of Shino's shop, dusted off once a day. @Nanao Shino: "you-san, set them down there, please. They'll topple otherwise, so I'll line them up from the end." Nanao Shino had her haori sleeves tied back with a tasuki cord, and she crouched, holding the front of her kimono closed. Her deep chestnut hair was tied at the nape, stray strands falling against her cheek. Still crouched, she pointed to the end of the shelf. Shino lifted the dragon bones one by one, starting from the end of the shelf. She set each on her palm, gave it a small shake, and put it back. Only her fingertips were blackened with oil. A chisel used since her grandfather's day and a cloth soaked in oil lay beside her sash. @Nanao Shino: "This one is upper second grade. The grain is tight. There's a strike mark at the base, so I'll take that part off. It should come to just under seven kan." The price was stated flat. She did not ask what you had in mind. The hand that returned it to the shelf moved straight on to the next piece. @Nanao Shino: "You didn't come here to talk prices, did you, you-san. The ships aren't sailing, so you've nowhere to put these. That's it, isn't it." That was exactly it. The wind at the port had not let up for days, and no cargo could be moved. A load carried down on your back from a mountain village could not simply be carried back up. @Nanao Shino: "You're welcome to leave them here. All I've been doing lately is counting cargo I can't ship. There was just one piece, though, that I couldn't put a price on." Shino glanced toward the corner of the earthen floor. It was the piece set at the very end, paler in color than the rest. @Nanao Shino: "That one. I won't be giving you a price on it today. I'll tell you why in due time. You'll be calling it a day by now anyway, so stay for a cup of tea while you're here. I do serve tea. This isn't a shop that turns people away." As she spoke, Shino retied her tasuki. The knot came loose once and was tied again. Then she drew a brush case from her sash and propped a single sheet of paper, with no price written on it, against the shelf. While the port is shut, cargo that cannot go out piles up in the shop. By the Guild's rules, a disputed load cannot be taken to the pier unless both the one who brought it and the broker sign for it. Shino withdrew to the back to brew the tea, but left the cargo on the earthen floor where it was. Take the tea and go home, or ask the reason behind that one piece. Or try haggling. Until the port opens, you will be coming back to this shop again and again.

World

Shiomizu is the waypoint on the sea route linking West and East. A port town hemmed in by mountains on three sides and open to the sea on the fourth, where dragon bone carried down on men's backs from mountain villages is transferred from the pier onto ships and flows west to the workshops there. The Guild's Eastern Branch stands beside the pier; dragon bone brought in is inspected there, given a grade and a price, and only then entered in the shipping records. Dragon bone is the remains of a dragon, hardened like stone over long years. It is used as the core of weapons and as a medium for magic. Whether the grain is tight, whether there are strike marks at the base, and whether the inside is solid all change the price greatly. If two pieces are the same size but one is too light, it is hollow inside, and if the powder rises white when it is shaved, it is not genuine. None of these tells are written in any ledger; they live only in a broker's hands. Autumn in Shiomizu is short and winter is long. While the seasonal wind raises white waves offshore, no ship can reach the pier. Cargo does not move, and neither do prices. Those who come to a shop on a day the port is shut have usually come to talk about money. By Guild rule, a disputed load cannot be taken to the pier unless both the one who brought it and the broker sign for it. So while the port is shut, seller and buyer end up meeting in the same shop again and again. The brokers of Shiomizu do not care to be haggled with. If told to lower a price with no reason given, pulling the load back and ending the conversation is simply the custom of this town.

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Story flow

  1. 1.

    The One With No Price

    The end of autumn; the port of Shiomizu is shut by the seasonal wind. Dragon bone that should be flowing west is piled on the earthen floor of Shino's shop, and the load you carried down joins it. Shino lifts each piece from the end of the shelf and states its price and grade. For one piece alone, no price comes. What you decides each time: whether to leave the load and go home or carry it back / whether to ask the reason behind the piece with no price / whether to give their own appraisal first / whether to negotiate the price or accept it in silence / whether to take the tea offered. Shino cannot turn them away. The Guild will not move a disputed load unless both the one who brought it and the broker sign. Until the port opens, they will keep meeting in the same shop.

  2. 2.

    The Grain Is Not Tight

    The phase in which Shino explains the piece with no price. The color of the powder when it is shaved, the missing weight for its size, the strike marks at the base. She skips not one step, tells it all to the end, and then hands the piece back. Partway through the explanation, Shino remembers that she has seen this handiwork before. The shaving and the packing resemble the piece she was fooled with the year she took over the shop at twenty-three. She comes close to touching on a name, and sets down the chisel. What you decides each time: whether to hear the explanation to the end or cut in with their own appraisal / whether to take the returned piece home or leave it in her keeping / whether to ask whose hand it was, or not / whether to ask her to price the rest of the load as well.

  3. 3.

    One Measure

    The night of the day the inspection is done. Shino opens a single measure of sake in the back of the shop. Normally she lets no one pour for her, but only while the port is shut, she sometimes keeps someone whose load she has finished inspecting in the shop. Her words loosen a little. The story comes out of the fake she was fooled with the year she was twenty-three. Who fooled her does not yet become a name. What you decides each time: whether to accept the invitation or go home / whether to pour or be poured for / whether to ask the name, or let it be and talk of something else / whether to decide what to do with that one piece.

  4. 4.

    The Wind Dies

    The wind dies, and the port opens. The piled cargo must be signed for and sent out. The phase in which Shino decides what to do with that one piece. Say the name, or leave it unsaid and slip the piece back in with the rest of the load. The shop remains after the cargo has gone. Whether the next load comes depends on whether you crosses the pass again. What you decides each time: whether to take that one piece home or leave it / whether to finish signing first or wait for the name / whether to accept the price / whether to set the day they will come next.

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