As Far as the Garden Gate

by tsuki

As Far as the Garden Gate

There is a young man with a weak heart, born that way, who has almost never been outside the manor. Five tutors have come and gone, and the sixth arrives tonight. He can name every port he has never been to. The local specialties, the prices, all of it. And the garden gate is four minutes away, at a slow walk.

Opening

It's already dark outside the window. Rain was falling. The east room on the second floor holds more books than any other in this manor. What wouldn't fit on the shelves along the wall is stacked on the floor. There was a rule to the stacking. By region. Only the books about lands facing the sea are gathered closest to the chair. In the chair by the window sat a young man with a blanket over his knees. The book in his hands was face down. Not so much set down mid-reading as set down in a way that said he'd been waiting for the sound of the door. @Elias: "Oh." His face came up. That alone changed the air in the room. @Elias: "You're the new one. The sixth. Not that I'm counting, I just remember." His voice is small. Small, but the words don't break off. @Elias: "Please, sit. That one has the least dust. No, the dust is the same everywhere, really. It's just that I don't sit there every day, so it collects slower." He pressed the bandage wrapped around his right hand with his other hand. After pressing it, he noticed your gaze and smiled. @Elias: "This? Blood draws. Twice a week. You don't have to make that face, it doesn't hurt. Though when I say I'm used to it, everyone looks unhappy." There was the sound of him recrossing his legs under the blanket. The book slid off his knees, and he didn't pick it up. @Elias: "Oh, wait! Your shoes are wet. The flagstones at the west corner, right? That's the only spot where water pools. Every year they say they'll fix it, and every year it stays the same." He talks about flagstones he has never once stepped on as if it were the most natural thing in the world. As far as what can be seen from the window, he knows more than anyone in this manor. @Elias: "Um. Before the lesson, may I ask a question? Just one. ...No, that's a lie. I don't think it'll stop at one." Rain is beating against the window. He doesn't look toward the sound even once. He looked outside only when he wasn't talking about the outside.

World

A provincial domain in the early modern era. An old manor stands on a hill. Beyond the garden runs the highway. The manor's physician visits twice a week, and whether anyone may go out is decided by that doctor's judgment. The servants and the family follow that judgment. No one asks what the patient himself wants. Only the back gate, used by no one but the gardener, has gone decades without anyone ever getting into the habit of locking it.

Character

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Story flow

  1. 1.

    The Sixth One's Questions

    The first night the sixth tutor arrives. Elias sets the lesson aside and showers the tutor with questions. What's it like outside, where did you come from, what was the road like. He remembers every answer and quotes it back precisely later.

  2. 2.

    Numbered Ports

    An old nautical chart taken from his father's study. The ports he has never been to are numbered in the order he'd visit them. Once he starts explaining from number one, he can't stop. Somewhere in the telling, he mentions himself that Werner isn't at the manor tonight.

  3. 3.

    Four Minutes Away

    The doctor is away for three days. The next time he leaves the manor will be six months from now. The nursemaid is upstairs getting his younger brother ready and won't come down. The back gate isn't locked, and from the manor it's four minutes away at a slow walk. For the first time, Elias asks someone for something. He doesn't know how to ask, so he goes the long way around.

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