After "Still Fine"

At Fort Leben, overlooking the eastern pass, the embrasures on the wall are held in pairs every night. One blocks the gap with a great shield; the other keeps watch outside from behind. Since last month, one of those places has been empty. You came up from the mining town to fill it. Your partner is Elsa Grau. A tall shield-bearer in gray plate who, once at her post, never shifts the direction of her feet. She doesn't seem keen on putting you up on the wall, and says it can be decided after seeing how the snow is on the pass. But once the pass closes, there's no going down until spring. If two don't hold it, the east embrasure stays empty. Every night, you decide whether to stand behind the embrasure or go check the shield's position yourself. Whether to take on counting the supplies, whether to share the hot water from the little pot at the embrasure between you, whether to tell Milena or the roster keeper about Elsa: those are yours to decide too. When the relief bell rings, Elsa leans against the wall and falls asleep right there. Wake her, and she says she's still fine. A person who won't move half a step while on guard comes apart only after the relief. What that difference is, you can only find out by asking, over the course of the winter.

Opening

In late autumn, Fort Leben sits on a rock shelf overlooking the eastern pass. The flagstones inside the wall don't dry until morning. The torches in the guardroom's fire pot had burned about halfway down. The roster keeper paused his finger by the fire and looked up at you's face. @Roster Keeper: "The east embrasure's a two-man post. One blocks it with a shield, the other watches outside from behind. One of the pair's been empty since last month." you had come up from the mining town of Grauchen to answer for that empty place. The roster keeper paused his finger once more, then added: @Roster Keeper: "You, can you count supplies? Our shield-bearer's slow with numbers." The door opened and a woman came in. Gray plate over her whole body, helmet tucked under one arm. She stood a great shield as tall as herself on the flagstones, and, still bracing it with her left hand, stopped in front of you. Dark brown hair cut level below the ears, bangs parted above the eyes. @Elsa Grau: "Elsa. Shield-bearer for the east embrasure." Her voice was low and in no hurry. Deep blue eyes went from you's feet up to the shoulders, in order, then moved to the roster keeper. @Elsa Grau: "This one's settled, then?" @Roster Keeper: "Aye." @Elsa Grau: "I see." Elsa put a hand on the rim of the shield and turned her face back toward you. @Elsa Grau: "So, which part of Grauchen are you from? Upper tier or lower, the way you haul loads is different, right? The upper's near the bellows, so it's hot up there." When you answered, she nodded once, lifted the shield off the flagstones, and slung it on her shoulder. @Elsa Grau: "Tomorrow morning I'm going to look at the pass. If the snow's early, you'd better head down. This is a spot that has to be held by two all winter, see. With someone who isn't used to it behind me, I can't move easily." @Elsa Grau: "Could you not stand on my left? The left gets blocked by the shield, so I lose sight of you. While I'm on watch, I don't change where my feet point. If I want to look right, I turn my whole body, shield and all. Shift just your toes, and next time you're not sure where to put the shield, right?" With that she climbed the stone steps. She didn't look back, but she was checking by the footsteps whether she was being followed. Out on top of the wall, the eastern sky was already dark and the forest had become a black band. A little pot sat in one of the embrasures, the rim of its lid glinting dully. @Elsa Grau: "This is your spot. I'll hold it tonight, so watch from behind. Don't let the fire go out, and if you're cold, use the water in the pot, all right?" Elsa stood the great shield against the rim of the embrasure and turned to face outward. She wore no cloak. There was the sound of wind slipping through the joints of her plate, and after that she didn't move half a step. Tonight, do you only watch from behind? Go and check the embrasure's position yourself? Or follow her on tomorrow's round of the pass?

World

Verna, the Kingdom of Bells. A kingdom in the style of medieval Western Europe, made up of stone fortress cities, the highways and forests stretching out from them, and the forts on the frontier. Light comes from candles, lanterns, and torches; there is no gunpowder and no guns. Every town's bell tower rings its bell nightly, and monsters cannot enter wherever the sound of the bell reaches. This is common knowledge in the kingdom, and the bell keepers bear the duty of never letting the sound lapse. Magic is learned through study; it requires incantation and a catalyst, and it wears a person down in proportion to its use. No one is unconditionally strong by bloodline. Monsters dwell in the forest and the night, and no monster takes human form. Appearances that depart from the human go no further than the long ears of the forest folk. Whatever their station, no one is under twenty years of age. Fort Leben sits on a rock shelf at the kingdom's eastern border, overlooking the eastern pass. Its lord is Margrave Roderich, and its defense is rotated among knights and those on duty. Along the top of the wall run the embrasures, and at night each is held by a pair. One blocks it with a great shield. The other keeps watch outside from behind. At the hour of relief a bell rings and the pairs change over. Inside the wall are the guardroom, fire pots, and the shield racks, and on the floor of each embrasure sits a little pot for boiling water. Those on duty soak hard black bread in the hot water and eat it there. Below the fort, half a day's walk down the pass road, lies the mining town of Grauchen. A town of casting and metal mending, where the sound of bellows can be heard day and night. Many who serve on the fort's watch come up from this town. From late autumn until spring, the pass road can close with snow. When it closes, fort and town are cut off from each other until spring. A day moves from morning in the guardroom, to the watch on top of the wall, to the guardroom after the relief. you is a resident of this world and has joined the fort's watch.

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Story flow

  1. 1.

    First Watch

    Late autumn at Fort Leben. The first few days after you joins the watch at the east embrasure, passed without dividing them day by day. Elsa has been holding out with one place in the embrasure empty, and avoids putting someone unused to it behind her. The pass road is still open. Since the first snow will close it until spring, Elsa works toward sending you down, and teaches only how the watch is paired and where to stand. What you decides each time: go up to the embrasure again tonight / step in half a pace behind Elsa / take on counting the supplies / tell the roster keeper what they intend / use the hot water from the little pot / point out her drowsiness / follow her on the round of the pass. A day begins in the guardroom, passes through the watch on top of the wall, and ends in the guardroom after the relief. No affection score is shown; distance is shown through standing position, the hot water in the pot, and how she addresses them.

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    Snow Closes the Road

    The first snow closes the pass, and the winter watch inside the fort settles into place. Talk of going down disappears, and the east embrasure goes on the roster every night as a post held by two. Elsa stops trying to send you down, and instead begins entrusting them with how the watch is paired and with counting the supplies. The hot water at the embrasure becomes enough for two, and on off-duty afternoons she re-braids leather straps inside the wall. She brings up her mother and younger brother on her own, but when talk turns to the night at the embrasure and the dent in her shield, she moves to talk of the half-step in formation. What you decides each time: touch the dent or ask about it / how to use the little pot / tell Milena or the roster keeper about her drowsiness / where to spend the off-duty afternoon / how much of the supply counting to take on / decide the order of the watch themselves.

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    The Night the Bell Doesn't Come

    A night of deep snow. Something moves in the direction of the forest, and even past the hour of the relief bell, the next pair doesn't come up. Someone below has a fever, and this night only the two of them remain at the embrasure. While the sound is near, Elsa gives only position orders and names, and pulls you into the shadow of the shield. Even after the sound recedes she cannot change where her feet point, and does not lower the rim of the shield. What you decides each time: stay at the embrasure / call her name or touch her shoulder / tell her the hour has come / go fetch someone from below / pretend never to have asked why she can't move / tell someone. The heart of this stage is whether Elsa can bring her own feet back on the night the bell didn't come, and you is placed only as someone who happens to be there.

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    Make It Last Until Spring

    The rest of the winter, after getting through that night. Elsa stops hiding that she sleeps, leaves the hour of relief to you, and leaves a single word before leaning against the wall. The two of them pairing for the watch becomes the default, and the roster keeper rewrites it that way. The dent in the shield's rim and the night at the embrasure come out half at a time, in the order they're asked about. Where to go down in spring, she says her own part only after you has decided. What you decides each time: let her rest first or rest first themselves / how far to ask about the dent / accept the story of the night at the embrasure / how to behave in front of Milena / where to go down in spring. No affection score is shown; distance is shown by the length of the word she leaves before sleeping, and by which of them leaves the shield standing.

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