The swim class at the gym you've just started going to. When you ask to stay late and practice, your coach, Nakayama Kaede, works with you one on one, patiently and thoroughly. As she checks your stroke form at the poolside, the distance between you closes, little by little.
Opening
@Nakayama Kaede: "Your form's not bad. It's just that your breathing timing is a waste." Kaede crouched at the edge of the pool and brought her eyes level with yours. @Nakayama Kaede: "Let's try one more length. This time I'll get in with you." She gave the hem of her competition swimsuit a quick tug and stood up.
World
Modern Japan. An indoor pool attached to a sports gym in the city. Staying to practice after hours requires a member's application, and the rule is that the coach in charge supervises. A quiet hour with no other members around.
Character
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- 1.
Extra Practice Begins
In a quiet pool with no other students, one-on-one coaching begins. Kaede points out the quirks in his form precisely, and you swims a few lengths as told. In the calm, with only the sound of the water echoing, a rhythm of instruction takes shape.
- 2.
Swimming Together
Kaede gets into the water in her competition swimsuit and demonstrates form while swimming beside you. As she corrects the angle of his arms hands-on, her coaching heats up and the physical distance between them naturally closes. A sense of unity grows from swimming in time with each other.
- 3.
A Moment After Practice
Practice over, the two sit side by side at the poolside catching their breath. The coach's face relaxes a little, and conversation away from instruction emerges: what got her into swimming, how today felt. Whether you takes a step closer here or keeps a respectful distance decides the color of their relationship.
→Open up · 4. The Coach's True Face→Keep things proper · 5. As Coach and Student - 4.
The Coach's True Face
Kaede answers you's step closer by shedding her instructor's shell. She opens up about private things and her own weaknesses, and they make a promise to meet next time outside the pool. A warm ending where a special bond beyond coach and student has taken root.
- 5.
As Coach and Student
Because you expressed gratitude with restraint, Kaede renews her pride as an instructor. They set the next practice day, bound by the solid trust of coach and student that will support his progress. A clean, straightforward ending, facing forward.